Liz Lochhead — Dracula (PDF, 33 pages)
By a night‑watcher of the Glasgow Library
The rain had been falling for hours, a steady percussion on the glass panes of the university’s old reading room, turning the world outside into a smear of street‑lights and soot. Inside, the air smelled of ink, dust, and the faint, sweet tang of old paper—an aroma that always made Liz feel as though she were stepping back into the stories that had shaped her childhood.
She was alone, save for the ancient clock on the far wall that ticked with a solemn patience. In her lap rested a thin stack of printed pages, the edges frayed, the typeface a sober, unadorned Times New Roman. The PDF had been emailed to her three weeks ago, a project from a colleague in the Comparative Literature department: a 33‑page translation of Bram Stoker’s Dracula into Scots, with footnotes that traced the poem‑like cadence of the original into the cadences of the Lowlands.
The translator’s name was a mystery. The email had been signed only “M,” and the file itself bore no metadata beyond the date it was saved. The only clue was the title, bolded in the centre of the first page: DRACULA – A Translation into Scots by Liz Lochhead. The name had been inserted by the system, not by the author. And now, as the rain hammered the glass, Liz felt an odd tremor in the pit of her stomach, a whisper of something ancient and watching.
She lifted the first page, the words of Jonathan Harker’s journal printed in a careful, lyrical Scots. “‘I have arrived at the Castle of Count Dracula,’ he wrote, ‘and the air is as cold as a winter’s night in the Highlands.’”
The translation was beautiful, each line a knot of language that tightened the original’s horror with the familiar rhythms of her own tongue. She read aloud, letting her voice rise and fall with the cadence of the text, and the room seemed to respond. The rain’s patter turned into a low, throbbing echo, as if the building itself were listening.
On page five, where Harker describes the Count’s “pale face” and “sharp teeth,” Liz felt a chill that was not entirely the rain’s doing. She looked up, and for a fleeting second caught a shadow pass across the far wall—thin, elongated, a ripple of darkness that seemed to melt back into the stone as quickly as it had appeared.
She shook her head, laughed at herself, and continued reading. By page twelve, the translation had taken on a rhythm that made the narrative pulse like a heart: “The Count’s eyes, like twin coals, stared out of the darkness, and a smile crept across his lips, thin as a new‑moon blade.”
It was on page seventeen that she reached the moment when Dr. Van Helsing first confronts the Count. In the original, the language is stark, a confrontation of science against superstition. In her translation, the Scots tongue turned it into a folk‑song, each line a stanza that rose and fell with a lilting, almost musical quality. Liz felt the words wrap around her, pulling at a memory she didn’t know she possessed: a night in the old part of Glasgow, a bonfire on the River Clyde, a tale told by an old woman in a shawl about a “night‑spirit” who would come for the living in the dead of winter.
She turned the page, and the room seemed to grow darker. The clock ticked louder, the rain’s rhythm grew more insistent. At the bottom of the page, a footnote caught her eye:
The Count’s “revenant” is rendered here as “the wraith that rides the night‑wind”, an echo of the old Scots legend of the bean-nighe, the washer‑woman of the river, who foretells death.
Liz’s heart hammered. She knew the legend—how the bean‑nighe stood at the water’s edge, scrubbing the blood‑stained shirts of those about to die. In the tale, she sang a mournful song that could be heard for miles, a song that made the wind itself shiver.
On page twenty‑four, the narrative described the Count’s lair—an ancient, crumbling castle perched on a hill, its stones soaked in centuries of blood. The translation used a phrase Liz had never heard before: “the stones sang a low lament, as if the very walls were weeping for the souls they’d held.” She felt the words settle on her skin, cold and heavy. She glanced at the window; the rain had stopped. A thin, silver line of moonlight sliced through the gloom, casting long, wavering shadows across the floor.
She could have turned the page, closed the book, and walked away. But the story had taken a grip on her, as if the very act of translation had summoned something else—something that existed between the lines, between the original English and the Scots version, a creature born of the interplay of tongues. The PDF, a mere collection of pixels, felt suddenly alive, humming with a low, resonant frequency that matched the rhythm of the rain that had just ceased.
On page thirty‑one, the final confrontation unfolded. Van Helsing and his companions had gathered in the castle’s crypt, torches flickering against the damp stone, the scent of mildew mingling with the metallic tang of blood. They recited prayers, wielded crucifixes, and placed garlic upon the altar. The Count rose, his eyes burning like twin embers, his mouth a gash of darkness. In the original, his voice is described as “a sound like a great wind.”
In Liz’s translation, the line read:
“His voice was the sigh of the wind that whips the moor after a storm, a sound that lingers in the bones of those who hear it, as if the hills themselves were breathing his name.”
She felt the words vibrate through the floorboards, through the old stone walls, through the very marrow of the building. As she read the last line—“And with a howl that shattered the night, the Count fell, his darkness scattered like ash upon the wind”—the lights in the reading room flickered and went out. The silence that followed was absolute, broken only by the distant, echoing howl of a wind that seemed to carry a mournful chant.
Liz sat in the darkness, heart pounding, the 33‑page PDF clutched in her hands. She could feel the weight of the pages, the faint rustle like a whisper. The old clock on the wall struck midnight, a deep, resonant gong that seemed to reverberate through the entire building.
She lifted her head and, in the thin beam of moonlight that filtered through the cracked shutters, she saw something moving near the window—a silhouette, tall and gaunt, the shape of a man with a cape that seemed to be made of night itself. The figure paused, as if listening, then turned its head toward her. Its eyes, two pits of black fire, met hers.
In that instant, Liz understood why the translator had hidden their identity. The translation was more than a scholarly exercise; it was a conduit, a bridge between worlds. The act of rendering Stoker’s words into the cadences of Scots had opened a door, and the Count—no longer merely a fictional monster, but a revenant of the old legends—had found a way back, drawn by the sound of his own story told in a tongue that resonated with his ancient hunger.
The Count’s voice, low and velvety, drifted through the room, not in English, but in a language that sounded like the wind over the Scottish moors, like a low chant that rose from the depths of a river:
“Aye, lassie, ye have called me. I have waited a hundred years for a voice that can sing my tale in the language of the hills. I am the wraith that rides the night‑wind, the bean‑nighe that washes the shirts of the dead. I am Dracula, and I am yours.”
Liz’s breath caught. The PDF fell from her hands, fluttering like a wounded bird, and landed on the floor, its pages fanning out, each one catching the moonlight like a set of tiny, trembling lanterns. She stared at the first page, at the words she had just read, and felt a strange peace settle over her. She was no longer just a translator; she was a keeper of a story that lived between worlds, a bridge that could bind or break the ancient pact between the living and the dead.
She stood, the cold stone floor biting at her shoes, and walked to the window. The Count stood just beyond the glass, his figure a silhouette against the moonlit sky, the wind tugging at the hem of his coat. He raised a hand—a gesture of both greeting and warning. As his fingers brushed the pane, a gust of wind burst through, scattering the loose pages of the PDF across the room like snow.
Liz watched as the pages swirled, each one catching a flash of moonlight, each bearing the ghost of a story that was no longer hers alone. She reached out, catching the page that held the line about the Count’s voice—“the sigh of the wind that whips the moor after a storm.” She felt the words pulse under her fingertips, a thrum that matched the rhythm of her own heart.
In that moment, she realized what she must do. She would not close the book, nor would she try to seal the Count away. Instead, she would write. She would add a line, a footnote, a marginal note that would remind the world that stories have power, that translation is an act of invitation. She would write:
“In the telling, we bind the teller to the tale; let those who listen remember that every night‑wind carries a whisper, and that a word spoken in the right tongue may summon both dread and hope.”
She wrote it in a careful, looping script, the ink dark against the paper. The moment the pen touched the page, the wind outside howled louder, a mournful keening that seemed to echo through centuries. The Count’s silhouette wavered, then solidified, his eyes softening.
He inclined his head in a gesture of respect, then turned and melted back into the night, his form dissolving into the wind that rattled the old panes. The room fell quiet once more, the only sound the soft rustle of the scattered pages settling onto the floor.
Liz gathered the PDF, now no longer a pristine 33‑page document but a living, breathing artifact—its edges frayed, its pages annotated with a hand that had just touched something beyond paper. She slipped it into her bag, feeling the weight of the story, of the Count, of the bean‑nighe, of all the myths that swirled in the Scottish night.
When she left the library, the rain had begun again, gentle at first, then building into a steady drumming. The streets of Glasgow glistened under the street‑lamps, the city alive with its own legends. Liz walked home, the PDF tucked safely under her coat, the moon a silver coin in the sky.
She knew that tomorrow she would return to the university and share the translation with her colleagues, but she also knew that she would keep that extra line close to her heart. For she had learned, in the hush of that old reading room, that stories are doors, and translation is the key. And sometimes, when the wind is right, those doors open to more than just imagination—they open to the ancient pulse of the land itself, to the echo of voices that have waited centuries to be heard again.
The end—
(And if you happen to find a PDF titled “Liz Lochhead — Dracula, 33 pages,” be sure to read it aloud in the rain. You may hear the wind answer.)
Liz Lochhead’s adaptation of Dracula, first staged in 1985, is widely regarded as one of the most compelling modern reinterpretations of Bram Stoker's gothic masterpiece. By shifting the focus toward female agency and the psychological complexities of the characters, Lochhead creates a version that resonates with contemporary themes of power, sexuality, and madness. Key Features of Lochhead’s Adaptation
Lochhead's script introduces several significant departures from the original novel to sharpen its thematic focus:
The Westerman Sisters: Unlike the original novel where Mina and Lucy are friends, Lochhead presents them as sisters (the Westermans), deepening their emotional bond and the shared pressures of transitioning into womanhood and marriage.
Expanded Role of Renfield: Renfield is transformed into a more articulate and sympathetic figure who often speaks in rhymes, serving as a tragic observer of the encroaching darkness.
Modernized Language and Humor: The adaptation incorporates modern speech patterns, sharp wit, and innuendo, which help ground the gothic horror in a relatable reality.
Revised Cast: Several characters from the novel, such as Quincey Morris and Arthur Holmwood, are removed. In their place, Lochhead adds new characters like the maid Florrie Hathersage and asylum nurses Nisbett and Grice, who provide a working-class perspective. Themes and Analysis
The play is celebrated for its "feminist bite," as it deconstructs the patriarchal structures of the Victorian era. Liz Lochhead and the Gothic — York Research Database
Lochhead’s Dracula: Forms and Sources
Lochhead’s Dracula-related work takes multiple forms: dramatic adaptation, poetic response, and theatrical monologue. Rather than producing a direct line-for-line translation of Stoker’s plot, Lochhead selects themes and scenes that resonate with her concerns—female agency, sexual politics, language and voice—and reshapes them using Scots idiom, contemporary stagecraft, and a heightened emotional register. Her approach can be read as both homage and critique: she retains the Gothic’s atmosphere while exposing its patriarchal anxieties.
Close Reading: The Horror on Page 33
While page numbers can vary slightly between print runs (a 2005 reprint vs. a 1998 first edition), the material on page 33 consistently includes the following pivotal exchange. The scene: The “Crew of Light” (Van Helsing, Seward, Arthur, Quincey) has surrounded Lucy’s tomb. After staking Lucy, they turn their attention to Mina, who they suspect is now Dracula’s accomplice.
On page 33, Mina utters what many critics consider the play’s thesis statement:
“And supposing I don’t want to be saved? Supposing this—this freedom—is what I’ve always craved? You think your crosses and your wooden stakes are the answer? You are the monsters. You who would cut out a woman’s heart before you’d let it beat for itself.”
This is the moment of rupture. Van Helsing orders Arthur to force his bleeding chest upon Mina, using her known attraction to blood against her. Lochhead’s stage direction reads: “He forces her head down. She resists, then, horrifyingly, she gives in. A long, terrible, sucking sound. The lights flicker red.”
Why is this page so searched for? Because it is the play’s ideological ground zero. It forces the audience to ask: who is the real predator? Dracula, who offers a dark, transgressive freedom? Or Van Helsing, who forces a woman to submit to a brutal, masculine ritual under the guise of “saving” her? Page 33 is where Lochhead seizes the Gothic genre and turns it inside out.
How to Legally Access Page 33
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